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Hi all! Sooo happy. I have actually completed yet another part, this time part 1 of a three part mystery. I'm kind of confused as to what to call this - on ff.net, it's all in one document, partially because they're all part of the same storyline, and partially (honestly) to get more readers, since people tend to read longer stuff more frequently. On the other hand, I don't know if I could really post each of these separately, since there's a later chap with my kickass OFC, and people would be like 'who the hell is Olutotsi? this is no one-shot!' So, yeah. Anyway, newest installment in Ghosts, first part of a three-parter. Also, a mystery! ( Chapter 4 )Ahhhh, a bad ending. But a suspenseful one. Maybe? Perhaps? No. Well then. Tags: fandom: naruto, pairing:sasunaru, story: ghosts
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At last, at last! I have finally finished this chapter, mostly difficult because it doesn't have much on interpersonal relationships, etc. But I still hope it's cool in terms of action (something new to me) and weird shit, something I always love to have in fic. Anyway, Jiraiya and Naruto continue their adventures, when who should they meet but... a woman! And not just a woman, but a woman that has an actual personality. Awesome. Oh, yeah, and in case you missed it, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2( Chapter 3 )Tags: fandom: naruto, pairing:sasunaru, story: ghosts
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I was thinking about the tendency in slash (and het, sometimes) fics to use the word "keen" in a sexual situation. The authors probably don't know, of course, that "keen" is a word of horrible grief, or mourning. Banshees keen, which makes it so ironic when "Sasuke keened as Naruto teased him gently" and so forth. When you are having sex, you don't want your lover to keen - if they are, you are doing something wrong. Keen is also an entirely emotional word. It refers to an extremity of emotion, rather than a physical pain. If you are hit in the stomach with a aluminum bat, you are not going to keen. When your arm breaks or you're being tortured, you're not going to keen, you're going to scream your head off. So it's always interesting when "keen" is used in a sexual situation - and it works. It invokes an extremity of emotional distress during what is supposed to be a physically pleasurable moment. Tags: meta Current Location: home Current Mood: thoughtful Current Music: my housemates puttering about the kitchen
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